I must say, you've outdone yourself this time, this pic's amazing! Definately one of your best, plus it's a practice! I can't wait to see what the improved version will be like!

okay, here's what i think; good points: the piggyback pose worked, the girl's clothes + hairstyle [2nd on left] what I messed up: the skateboard design, the blonde girl's face [nose, shape, mouth, and pretty much everything else], the top of the arch please tell me what you think!!

I think this looks really cool! Great job^^